Friday feedback

Hey Guys

Friday the 13th of August

This morning I finished the mother drawing and started the level design.

From my partner feedback he did say 'why is she wearing shorts if she have bruises on her legs', which is a good question and will have to rethink that.

The shawl I thought was a good idea as my mum and most of my mum's friends that are mums wear a shawl to cover themselves to keep warm. Also I picked pick for the fact (research again...) okay, thought was something like women's' help in family abuse. Will change the colour of shawl to purple and white (both meaning domestic abuse)

Feedback:

• line art and colour for active to have contrast to make the player understand.
• think about, common/accidently sounds in house.
• Record some sounds.
• Key, camera and character size for the game level
• Camera view
• 'Parallax' to 2.5D environment
• Draw the first level with a perspective

Done the father drawing, here is the side by side drawing of Monster and Father. Do they look like the same person? Will have to wait for feedback from people from discord.

Feedback on discord, Ruby thinks that they do.