Comic - Story writing

Hey Guys

Tuesday the 3rd of August

Writing a story. Cant really write a story. I do bullet points. I get really frustrated.

Rules:

No backspacing and editing.

Living creature: Little child

Item: Key

Location: Rubbish

• Child walks down an allie, comes across rubbish area.
• See a shiny thing in a bin.
• Jumps into the bin.
• Raccoon jumps out of bin with key in mouth.
• The Child chases it.
• The raccoon gets corner in a dead end.
• The Raccoon buries the key. 
• Child tired, thinks its caught the raccoon.
• Child starts to corner it. Saying "where is the key".
• Raccoon jumps over the child. 
• Child too tired to chase, sits down.
• He notices something lumpy in pile of leaves.
• Its the key.
• Child picks up the key and starts unwrapping it.
• Its a chocolate key.

Second Story:

Rule:

Be more specific to a single thing, ie more focus on the character, or item, or location.

Character Name: Rue

Item: Tablet

Location: Lab

• Rue is in a containment, drawing on a tablet
• Feeling lonely.
• The tablet starts ooze out black ink
• The ink starts engolfing Rue's arms.
• Hey eyes open shown fully black.
• The door opens up and she leaves her room.
• Guard comes up to her to take her back to her room.
• She dodges and touches them making them her servant.

Video to understand how to layout and draw comic:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1dQEfL2BfUM