Continue from Wednesday

 Hey Guys!
Friday the 7th of May

Traci notes from my storyboard:

• Why is the shadow attacking the desktop? (even though I explained it) why visually?
• Re think the location of the desktop
• Shorten the animatic.
• Make the fight/build up to the fight scene shorter, and have the connection with the desktop and Kynn relation longer.

Its 9:23pm (same day)

Been working on the feedback and the clean up (I know I shouldn't but, kinda in a bad mood, so lets have an accomplishment and do some clean).

So I took out Pika surveilling, and put her just jumping off the table to, I don't know, she goes stretch her legs. Added the fact the desktop is important visually. And yeah... clean up so scenes cause, ugh! it was annoying me!!!!

Here is the video update of animatic:

https://youtu.be/L6u8WpA7pAQ

Feedback from last year graduate, Bethany Hayes.