Update: Working on the background and feedback from tutor (Chris)

 Hey Guys!

Wednesday the 21st of April

Feedback from the tutor:

The thumbnail of the video is good, just think about how to make the red dot more 'logical', ie, yes the cat is playing with it and it is the recording dot, but make it make more sense by connected the two. 

    My idea to connect it would probably be, when Kynn is preparing herself she realizes the dot isn't        there and then Pika 'tackles' her.

With the background: the right window wasn't in perspective. The red dashing line is the 'correction"

With that being incorrect, I fixed it and corrected most of the other parts of the room too. Including the walls and floor, bookshelf, table and the cubbyhole.

Before:

After:

I still like to add more things, things of some fandoms that I'm in. Chris, also said to fill up the bookshelf with items, which I like to do but a bit scared/uncertain how to do it as I like to keep it no line art for the background.

So far, quite happy with the background and the thumbnails. Maybe if I have extra time pretty up the thumbnails and clear it up a bit, as another thing Chris said was the part where Kynn (myself) pops myself out of the video and look at my channel, is a bit short, ie need to keep an eye on the paseing. But the part where Pika comes and jumps on my shoulders they are still looking at the channel page. It is until after the pan view of the ideas it goes back to the 'study room'.

I also ask Chris about my blogging and he said it is fine/what he like to see for blogging, so I'll just keep it up.

Apparently I'm ahead in the class/the work... (Insert Shrug).