Script Writing

 Hey Guys!
Wednesday the 17th of March

Hello? I love you. Bye

Can't see really the three acts.

Discussion: Possible, text first act, second act girl contemplating/"I wish I cant hear your voice one more time" - text, then last act the girl dies/end of world(?).

Father

Act 1: Dangerous storm

Act 2: Peg flings off

Act 3: Morning, no more storm, the coat shows that he was sheltering the 'family', mother and three children.

More time is more animating, but can give more tension.

Today we are:

Step Outline:

My Story:

INT. STUDY ROOM - AFTERNOON

KYNN, 22 year old student, busy head down, working on a computer, with a cat, PIKA, nestle into a cubbyhole on the desk. Kynn thumps her fist onto the desk in frustration, waking Pika in surprise. Kynn apologies to Pika by giving them a pat, puts on headphone and going back to work. Pika not fussed about encounter, prepares to go back to sleep, but notices something behind Kynn. Pika jumps off desk and sits on the mat, surveilling the area.

Pika reassures nothing is wrong, turns back around to jump back onto desk. Then a shadow creature stands behind Pika mencing. Pika swipes back around with claws out. The Shadow jumps back. The two staring each other down. The Shadow eyes up the desktop tower, Pika notices what the shadow is thinking and prowls towards the desktop, getting in the way of the shadow and desktop.

The shadow pounces onto the wall, trying to get around Pika. Pika jumps onto the wall trying to catch the shadow. The shadow jumps off the wall to the floor, before Pika can get them. Pika follows them, always a second too slow. Kynn listening to music while drawing, unaware what's happening behind her, while the shadow jumps from one side of the room to another corner of the room, while Pika is chasing it.

The shadow jumps in front of an orange bean-bag, Pika follows, but the shadow jumps up. Pika slams into the bean-bag. This is the shadows chance, it dashes towards the desktop. But it stops inches away from it. The shadow is confused, looks behind itself, sees Pika snarling with shadow's tail it Pika's mouth. The shadow startled, a beat past. Pika flings the shadow into the open closet. The shadow blinks in surprise, then in frustration. Pika gives a warning growl in an attack position. The door of the closet closes. Pika still in an attack position, believing that the threat is gone, relaxes, cleans their paw. Pika then turns around, jumps back onto the desk. Rubs up on Kynn. Kynn pats back. Pika curls back into cubbyhole on the desk. 

Sharing work... I was so embarrassed (to be honest I would have swore before embarrassed but, trying to keep professional). I'm not good at grammar, I try but I can't recognize it, good or bad, until a person struggles to read my work or tells me its bad. My step outline was absolutely bad, to the point the person couldn't read it and ran away when we swap people to critique.